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    • Our customer based on people of all ages and sex , because of the modern work pressure, long working hours , people today often do not have spare time to management their bodies , our product’s conception is making people to conctrol their helth condition in anywhere, at anytime .
    • In order to do that ,we plan to be able to put our product in all the market , where we can buy plants . so that consumers can more easily and quickly to buy our products.
    • In addition, we also plan to collaborate with major hospitals to carry out charitable activities , such like creating a "plant Cancer Detection Center" , eliminating the need for traditional methods which has a complex procedures.
    • Products in the market price will be slightly higher than general plant , but most of the consumers can afford.
    • We will explain the price later in the part 3 :the cost –benefit anaysis For the design of the product ,we have make our efforts ,because we succesfully developped a variety plants for different ages, such as asparagus for the elderly , roses for the young people.
    • About the publicity , we have created a product website , 24-hour online customer service staff will answer customers’ questions , the website also has customer response column for consumers to make recommendations and share shopping experience.
    • In addition, we will publish our product information in major newspapers and health , and it will be broadcast on television publicity and other media .

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    • Our customer based on people of all ages and sex , because of the modern work pressure, long working hours , people today often do not have spare time to management their bodies , our product’s conception is making people to conctrol their helth condition in anywhere, at anytime .
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    • Our customer based on is people of all ages and sex , bgenders. Because of the modern work pressure, and long working hours , people today often do not have spare time to managementtake care of their bodies , our product’s conception is making. The concept of our product is to help people to conctrol their helth condition inof their health, anywhere, at anytime .
    • ¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 1¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 1
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    • In order to do that ,we plan to be able to put our product in all the market , where we can buy plants . so that consumers can more easily and quickly to buy our products.
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    • In order to do that , we plan to be able to put our product in allto the market , where we can buy plants .health food stores, so that consumers can more easily and quickly to buy our products.
    • ¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 2¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 2
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    • In addition, we also plan to collaborate with major hospitals to carry out charitable activities , such like creating a "plant Cancer Detection Center" , eliminating the need for traditional methods which has a complex procedures.
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    • In addition, we also plan to collaborate with major hospitals to carry out charitable activities , such like as creating a "plant"natural/plant-based Cancer Detection Center" , eliminating the need for traditional methods which has ave complex procedures.
    • ¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 3¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 3
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    • We will explain the price later in the part 3 :the cost –benefit anaysis For the design of the product ,we have make our efforts ,because we succesfully developped a variety plants for different ages, such as asparagus for the elderly , roses for the young people.
      ¡Vota ahora!
    • WePrices will be explain the priced later in the "part 3 : the cost-benefit analysis¶ F". As for the design of the product , we have makto concentrate our efforts , because we have successfully developped a variety planof natural products for different age groups, such as asparagus for the-based product for elderly , roses-based product for the young people etc.
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    • About the publicity , we have created a product website , 24-hour online customer service staff will answer customers’ questions , the website also has customer response column for consumers to make recommendations and share shopping experience.
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    • About the publicity With respect to advertising, we have created a product website ,; a 24-hour online customer service staff will answer customers’ questions , t. The website also has a customer response columnfeedback page for consumers to make recommendasuggestions and share their shopping experiences.
    • ¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 6¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 6
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    • In addition, we will publish our product information in major newspapers and health , and it will be broadcast on television publicity and other media .
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    • In addition, we will publishFurthermore, our product information will be published in major newspapers and health , and it will be broadcastmagazines, along with being advertised on television publicity and in other media .
    • ¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 7¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 7