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- Yesterday, I was in my bathroom a terrible idea came to me ...
- I went to my sister's room when she was sleeping with very cold water in a glass.
I opened the door and then ... BOOH !
- I threw all the water in her head !
- She woke up but, strong like she is, she tooks me out of her bedroom and remain the same on me ... Oh my god ...
I'm so stupid !

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- Yesterday, I was in my bathroom a terrible idea came to me ...
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- Yesterday, I was in my bathroom and I had a terrible idea ~~came to me~~ ...
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- I went to my sister's room when she was sleeping with very cold water in a glass.
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- I went to my sister's room w~~hen she was sleeping with very cold water in a glass~~ith very cold glass of water while she was sleeping.
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- I opened the door and then ... BOOH !
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- I threw all the water in her head !
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- I threw ~~all~~ the water inat her head !
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- She woke up but, strong like she is, she tooks me out of her bedroom and remain the same on me ... Oh my god ...
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- She woke up ~~but, strong like she is, she tooks~~, and she dragged me out of her bedroom and ~~remain~~did the same ~~on me~~right back! ... Oh my god ...
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- I'm so stupid !
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