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Text from Nourhan - English

  • Don't miss a chance

    • Here in Egypt we have a really famous song called "El-Forsa" which mean "The Chance", its lyrics show everything about the importance of chances and why we always miss it.
  • Let me translate it to you, at the beginning he shows the chance as a really pretty girl riding a Bicycle, with her hair flying and doesn't show how beautiful she is, And only the sane person can know how beautiful she is and reach her, so she will change his life.
  • If you're only dreaming of touching her she would give you more than that, as she knows her friends and who ever she miss, gets regret.
    • Well, all I am trying to say is that we should not miss chances but we must do our best to catch it !!

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  • Sentence 1
    • Here in Egypt we have a really famous song called "El-Forsa" which mean "The Chance", its lyrics show everything about the importance of chances and why we always miss it.
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    • Here in Egypt we have a really famous song called "El-Forsa" which means "The Chance", its lyrics show everything about the importance of chances and why we always miss ithem.
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  • Sentence 2
    • Let me translate it to you, at the beginning he shows the chance as a really pretty girl riding a Bicycle, with her hair flying and doesn't show how beautiful she is, And only the sane person can know how beautiful she is and reach her, so she will change his life.
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  • Sentence 3
    • If you're only dreaming of touching her she would give you more than that, as she knows her friends and who ever she miss, gets regret.
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