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  • Influence of the media on how the news is perceived

  • I would like to talk about the following topic, since I will soon have to express my viewpoint in class about that: does the media have a major influence on how the news is perceived by the public?
  • Nowadays, the media can be considered as the link between from the one hand the political institutions, the foreign affairs, the economic situation and from the other hand, the public.
  • However, the responsibility of the media to influence the people can be discussed.
  • Does the media only reports the facts it is aware of or are these facts used to diffuse a viewpoint?
  • To begin with, it is technically very difficult to report a fact without providing a viewpoint.
  • The person who relates a fact, usually a journalist, cannot prevent his/her personal feelings from interfering into his/her story.
  • I personally had the opportunity to travel in Asia, where I discovered a culture which is different from the European way of life.
  • Nevertheless, it was also different, by far, from what the local media usually explains about Asian food, people or geography.
  • Nevertheless, the influence of the media has to be put into perspective.
  • It depends on the kind of facts.
  • When it comes to a environnemental accident, it remains very easy to relate facts properly since only facts need to be related.
  • Conversely, if it is about a political election or the economic growth, many viewpoints can emerge.
  • For instance, all journalists usually agree about the reasons of a road accident, but most of them disagree when it comes to the merits of a political measure.
  • The European measures taken to financially help Greece are a significant example of this.
  • To conclude, I think that in general the media deeply influence the public, even though the journalists might not be aware of their own responsibility.
  • They usually think that they are impartial when it is obviously not the case.

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    • I would like to talk about the following topic, since I will soon have to express my viewpoint in class about that: does the media have a major influence on how the news is perceived by the public?
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    • Nowadays, the media can be considered as the link between from the one hand the political institutions, the foreign affairs, the economic situation and from the other hand, the public.
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    • The person who relates a fact, usually a journalist, cannot prevent his/her personal feelings from interfering into his/her story.
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    • I personally had the opportunity to travel in Asia, where I discovered a culture which is different from the European way of life.
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    • Nevertheless, it was also different, by far, from what the local media usually explains about Asian food, people or geography.
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    • When it comes to a environnemental accident, it remains very easy to relate facts properly since only facts need to be related.
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    • For instance, all journalists usually agree about the reasons of a road accident, but most of them disagree when it comes to the merits of a political measure.
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    • To conclude, I think that in general the media deeply influence the public, even though the journalists might not be aware of their own responsibility.
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