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- morning
- I hold on my opinion, i will go to switzerland in summer.
- I preapre for the worst, because I do not speak in german and my english is so poor but I wanna go.
- I think so I will do succed.
- I have more knowledge and experience and practice for the job.

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- morning
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- good morning
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- I hold on my opinion, i will go to switzerland in summer.
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- I ~~hold on my opinion, i will go~~am keeping my word. I am going to sSwitzerland inthis summer.
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- I am still hold on my opinion, i will go to sSwitzerland inthis summer.
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문장 2
- I preapre for the worst, because I do not speak in german and my english is so poor but I wanna go.
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- I am preapared for the worst, because I do not speak ~~in g~~German and my eEnglish is so poor ~~but I wanna~~. I still want to go.
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- I ~~preapre~~am preparing for the worst, because I do not speak ~~in g~~German and my english is so poor, but I am still wanna go there.
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- I think so I will do succed.
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- I think so I will do succeed.
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- I think so, I will do succeed.
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- I have more knowledge and experience and practice for the job.
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- I have ~~more knowledge and experience and practice for the job~~lots more learning and practicing to do.
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- I have ~~more~~ knowledge, and i need experience an, so i need practiceing for the job.
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