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  • Essay

    • The question of preservation old buildings has been widely discussed in recent years.
    • Some people believe that old buildings have negative influence on modern cities` development while others claim that such buildings are priceless for science and history.
    • The first thing that should be noted is that old buildings are usually situated in cities` center; modern constructions are built around them.
    • It can be illustrated by Irkutsk city where city center looks like an outskirt of the town.
    • Narrow streets cannot be widen due to old buildings which take a huge part of this town.
    • Wooden houses with back yards take a valuable territory for modern buildings.
  • Additionally, old houses mostly belong to private owners who cannot afford new flats.
    • Hence, such kind of people, especially pensioners, cannot preserve their houses in original conditions.
    • Neither owners nor authorities take care about historical value of these houses and this irresponsibility affects the architecture of city in general.
    • On the other hand, these kinds of buildings are important part of national architecture, culture and history.
    • They are a reflection of the knowledge and experience of past generations.
    • In specific cases, some of these buildings have a significant scientific value.
    • In conclusion, I would say that old buildings should be preserved whatever the cost.
    • The authorities of cities should take additional measures immediately in order to keep them for next generation.
    • No doubt, modern cities should grow and develop, however they shouldn`t be built on the cultural heritage of the country.

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