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POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ TERAZ!Poprawiono

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  • The invention of the car has changed the world.

  • There is no doubt that the invention of the car offered our planet a new way to live.
    • Technology, especially cars, has totally come in our lives.
    • In my opinion, cars are necessary in today's world, although there are many things which make us think that we should stop using cars.
    • To begin with, they make our life very fast.
    • Many people all over the world have stopped waste their time on long trips to their friends and family.
  • As you know, wagons are not very fast.
    • Trade between cities and travelling are faster than ten centuries ago.
    • You and I are travelling by car, bus or other transport but wagons.
    • Despite of this, cars have made us an ecological problem.
    • Many scientists on every continent are trying to find a solution.
    • Air pollutions damage our ozone layer which protects us from deadly ultraviolet radiation.
  • However, there are places which have not changed.
    • It seems to be impossible but, for example, tribes in Australia do not need rubber wheels and petrol engine.
  • They travel by foot.
    • To sum up, I would argue that although cars have certain disadvantages, people want to improve their lives.
  • However, I think that we should try to prevent environmental damage.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English