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    • People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kin

  • Humans being have always been adverse to big or small changes that could modify their way of living.
  • Even if some of them could improve their life standards, not always people accept them immidiately.
  • For example since the Middle Ages humanity had been adverse to innovation, Galileo's theories wouldn't been accepted since the Reinassance even them are true.
    • Also in everyday life people tend to resist making big changes, for instance many young guys don't want to leave their own town to find better job position elsewhere only because they're afraid of big changes, even if this difficul choice could improve their life-style and let them work for better companies, earning higher salaries.
  • I think that the big problem related to this situation consist in losing big opportunities that are related to life changes, of course there is also the risk of a failure linked to drastic changes but even in that case there would certainly be something to learn from that experience.
  • One possible solution to this resistence would be to make to make small, progressive changes that could help people to improve their lives and reach their targets.
    • For example who would like to leave its own country for new city could start visiting it with a parent or friend, and only after a while decide to move in there alone.
  • Furthermore people who want to make some changes in their lives could contact through internet other individuals that had already take them.
  • As a result they can feel more confortable regarding this new change and be more enthusiastic in making it real.

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    • For example since the Middle Ages humanity had been adverse to innovation, Galileo's theories wouldn't been accepted since the Reinassance even them are true.
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    • Also in everyday life people tend to resist making big changes, for instance many young guys don't want to leave their own town to find better job position elsewhere only because they're afraid of big changes, even if this difficul choice could improve their life-style and let them work for better companies, earning higher salaries.
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    • Also in everyday life, people tend to resist making big changes, for instance many young guys don't want to leave their own town to find better job positions elsewhere only because they're afraid of big changes, even if thisat difficul choicet step could improve their life-style and let them work for better companies, earning higher salaries.
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    • I think that the big problem related to this situation consist in losing big opportunities that are related to life changes, of course there is also the risk of a failure linked to drastic changes but even in that case there would certainly be something to learn from that experience.
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    • One possible solution to this resistence would be to make to make small, progressive changes that could help people to improve their lives and reach their targets.
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    • For example who would like to leave its own country for new city could start visiting it with a parent or friend, and only after a while decide to move in there alone.
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    • For example who would likes to leave hits own country for a new city, could start visiting it with a parent or friend, and only after a while decide to move in there alone.
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    • Furthermore people who want to make some changes in their lives could contact through internet other individuals that had already take them.
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