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  • What are the advantages and disadvantages of being famous?

  • What are the advantages and disadvantages of being famous?
    • In my opinion, today many people look at famous Ukrainian politicians.
    • The situation in our country is so difficult now and the future of Ukraine depends on decision between our government and an opposition.
    • Many politicians use this situation in order to be more famous and popular.
    • Being the politician has many obvious advantages: 1.
    • Firstly, it gives politicians the opportunity to do something them really believe in, such as offering a way of development of Ukraine, an achievement of a total democracy in the country and joining it to EU.
    • They can manage a lot of important questions for the country. 2.
    • In addition, politicians are in general rich people. 3.
  • They can have many accomplices and devotees. 4.
    • Furthermore, a politician can become the president of the country.
    • This all seems very tempting, but on the other hand there are a lot of disadvantages: 1.
    • The politician should always think what and how to say about something to be understood correctly. 2.
    • If he makes a wrong solution, he will be unpopular among people, it’s one step from love to hate. 3.
    • What is more, pressmen, reporters are always keep up with politicians and write or tell about them.
  • They don’t have a private life without comments. 4.
    • Being the politician can be dangerous for them and their family because they have a high competition.
    • To sum up, I see two hands of this topic: advantages and disadvantages.
    • I think, the politics in our country is so untidy and corrupt to be a politician of Ukraine isn’t so popular.

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