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    • The following charts illustrate the quantity of Japanese travelled abroad from Japan from 1985 till 1995.
    • The second chart shows the percentage of Japanese visited Australia.
    • The number of Japanese travellers went abroad between 1985 and 1995 increased in 3 times (from 5 to 15 millions people).
    • The tourism abroad rose gradually till 1990 and dropped slightly in 1991.
    • Then, the travelling abroad continued it`s rise till 1995.
    • The percentage of Japanese tourists visited AU fluctuated constantly.
    • In 1985 only 2 % of Japanese visited AU, however, the number of tourists from Japan started rising and reached almost 5 % in 1989.
    • From 1990, after a sharp decrease to 4,2 %, the percentage of travellers from Japan resumed the growth and reached a peak of 6,3 % in 1994.
    • However, there was a slight drop to 6 % in 1995.
    • To sum up, the number of Japanese tourists travelled abroad rose constantly, nevertheless, the popularity of AU as a sightseeing direction wasn`t constant during this period.
    • Even though, the percentage of Japanese travelled to AU increased in over 3 times during this particular decade.

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    • The following charts illustrate the quantity of Japanese travelled abroad from Japan from 1985 till 1995.
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    • The following charts illustrate the quantity ofhow many Japanese people travelled abroad from Japan from 1985 untill 1995.
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    • The number of Japanese travellers went abroad between 1985 and 1995 increased in 3 times (from 5 to 15 millions people).
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    • The number of Japanese travellers who went abroad between 1985 and 1995 increased in 3 times (from 5tripled—went from 5 million people to 15 millions people).
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    • In 1985 only 2 % of Japanese visited AU, however, the number of tourists from Japan started rising and reached almost 5 % in 1989.
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    • In 1985 only 2 % of Japanese tourists visited AUustralia, however, the number of tourists from Japan started rising and reached almost 5 % in 1989.
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    • From 1990, after a sharp decrease to 4,2 %, the percentage of travellers from Japan resumed the growth and reached a peak of 6,3 % in 1994.
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    • From 1990, after a sharp decrease to 4,2 .2%, the percentage of travellers from Japan resumed the growthcontinued increasing and reached a peak of 6,3 .3% in 1994.
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    • To sum up, the number of Japanese tourists travelled abroad rose constantly, nevertheless, the popularity of AU as a sightseeing direction wasn`t constant during this period.
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    • To sum upIn conclusion, the number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad rose constantly, n. Nevertheless, the popularity of AUustralia as a sightseeing direcestination wasn`'t constant during this period.
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    • Even though, the percentage of Japanese travelled to AU increased in over 3 times during this particular decade.
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    • Even thoughDespite this being the fact, the percentage of Japanese tourists who travelled to AU increased in over 3 timesustralia more than tripled during this particular decade.
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