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Text from policlinico - English

  • Dear Dr. Smith

  • Dear Dr. Smith, I'd like to thank you for inviting me as a speaker at the 20th International Conference on Dialysis Technology.
    • I'd like to give you my brief resume for presenting me before starting my lecture.
    • As you know, I'm the CEO of KidneyCare the most important industry of disposable material and machines for dialysis.
    • I'm a hard-worker, eighteen hours every day.Travels, meetings, lunch symposia around the world without pause.
    • What's the secret of my shape and my performance?
    • My industry was founded by my father and he gave me the key of the success.
    • A very creative man!
    • He told me, you have always to study to improve yourself.
    • So I graduated in 1990 in Biotechnology at the University of Pittsburgh and then I achieved a Master on Nanotechnology.
    • Two years later, I was promoted as a Director of the Research Laboratory.
    • Finally, five years ago my father leave me the chair as his heiress.
    • At the beginning, I was afraid of the international economic crisis.
    • Fortunately, I have a fantastic team who support me, so we didn't have any difficulty but our sales are still going up.
  • I think I'd go back to the start again.

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