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  • My Country

    • This week my country adotped a new constitution.
    • If i watch tv or i listen a radio or read a newspaper, I'm troubled by the vision of the world about us.
    • It's very strange, the majority of newspaper describe this moment like a great moment of our history but it's the same constitution, it's the same people and it's the same country with the same problems of unemployment and poverty.

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    • If i watch tv or i listen a radio or read a newspaper, I'm troubled by the vision of the world about us.
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    • If iI watch tv or iTV, listen ato the radio, or read a newspaper, I'm troubled by the vision of the world aboutconcerning us.
    • If iI watch tv or i listen to a radio or read a newspaper,. I'm troubl am worried by the vision of the world about u world see on us and what there view is.
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  • 문장 3
    • It's very strange, the majority of newspaper describe this moment like a great moment of our history but it's the same constitution, it's the same people and it's the same country with the same problems of unemployment and poverty.
      투표하세요!
    • It's very strange, the majority of newspapers describe this moment like a great moment of our history, but in reality it's the same constitution, it's the same people and it's the same country, with the same problems of unemployment and poverty.
    • It's very strange,; the majority of newspapers describe this moment like it is a great moment ofin our history, but it's the same constitution, it's the same people, and it's the same country with the same problems of unemployment and poverty.
    • It's is very strange, the majority of newspaper describe this moment like a great moment of our history, but it's the same constitution, it's what is about the same people and it's the same country with fundamental rights to have the but basic needs. The country is facing the same problems of poverty and unemployment and poverty. nothing is done by the constitutions.
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