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- Hello! I'm Artem. I'm short.
- I have light-coloured eyes.
- I'm short straight and broun hair.
- I have not the moustage and beard.
- I wear glasses.

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- Hello! I'm Artem. I'm short.
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- Hello! I'm Artem. I'm a short stretched man, with light coloured eyes, short straight brown hair, and don't have moustache and beard.
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- Hello! I'm Artem. I'm short and have light-coloured eyes.
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- I have light-coloured eyes.
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- I'm short straight and broun hair.
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- I'm have short, straight ~~and broun~~, brown hair and I don't have any facial hair.
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- I have not the moustage and beard.
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- I ~~have not the~~don't have a mousta~~ge and~~che or a beard.
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- I wear glasses.
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- I used to wear glasses.
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- I wear glasses.
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