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  • For & against essay

    • We all searching for some new emotions, such as adrenaline.
  • Extreme sports became more popular nowadays.
    • Some people belive that extreme sports are the easist way to get away from it all, but is that true?
    • Extreme sports have both its advantages and disadvantages.
  • There are certain advantages to doing extreme sports.
    • To start with, you will travell around the world and discover new places.
    • New countries -new cultures, so it is a great chance to meet intresting people and make friends all over the world.
  • As a result, you become more confident and all-rounder person.
  • Furthermore, adrenaline rush and feel of freedom during doing extreme sports make your life bright and joyful.
  • It can become your personal hobby.
    • Also, extreme sports are good not only for your body, but for your mind too.
    • Because it is an amazing way to express your feelings, beat stress, relax and rest from problems in real life.
    • However, it is not surprise that extreme sports are very dangerous.
    • People, who do extreme sports, can be injured or even die.
  • So, it is important to have enough power and wit to act in difficult situation.
    • Because danger is always around you, such as an avalanche, strong wind or just a small malfunction can turn into a huge problem.
  • What is more, adrenaline can become like a drug for you.
    • I mean, that you can be addicted to extreme sports, you forget about real life, your job, friends, family.
    • So, it can distract you from something really important whereas all what you want is having fun and feel this adrenaline rush.
  • In addition, we can not do this kinds of sports in belarus.
    • Thus you should have enough money to buy special equipment, hire trainer or instructor, go to the gym, as you should keep fit.
  • In conclusion, doing extreme sports have its advantages and disadvantages.
    • I believe that there are a lot of differnt ways to get away from it all, and more safer than extreme sports.

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