添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

KAROLINA33からのテキスト - English

  • Snowman

  • Yesterday I made a snowman with my friends.
    • We do not get much snow here anymore so we use every opportunity we get to enjoy it.
  • There were four of us, two girls and two young men.
    • We divided responsibility for a execution of the task.
    • I was art director, my girlfriend Maya was in charge of supply, and boys were builders.
  • The snowman is 180 centimeter tall, has a blue hat (bucket), black eyes (milk bottle cork), fuzzy eyebrows made of grass and two dry branches for arms.
    • He smiles and makes every one who passes by feel nice, and puts a smile on their faces.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English