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Text from Darina1997 - English

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  • Well, I don't really like dancing.
  • It's not for me.
  • I figure I'm too shy for it.
    • Even when I was a kid and my mum dragged me to the dance floor in the cafe I wanted to back to my seat .However I liked the process of escaping from her.
  • It's like a funny game.
    • But everything aforesaid don't prevent me from loving watching the dance.
    • I know dancing is an art, a hard work and it's an entire science.
    • Nevertheless for me it's just a performance to my shame.
    • I enjoy it only if it looks spectacular: when the costumes are nice, when I like the words of a song the dancers dance at.
  • As for me dance should tell a story.
  • It's not just a sequence of well trained, skillful movements, it has to convey an idea, it is a theatre performance.
  • I used to watch dance shows on TV.
  • Dance everybody and Dancing with the stars before.
  • I liked them so much.
  • And I even had a favourites, you know.
  • I noticed that dances I liked more were the passionate ones.
  • The Latin Dance, Flamenco for example and so on.
  • A person should have a special trait of character to dance those dances.
  • Even the expression of fave and getures are important.
  • The costumes have to be bright and vivid they have to draw the attention .If all conditions are fulfilled your blood runs cold while you are watching it!
  • To sum up dancing is a real art indeed and can make a person feel excitement!

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