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Text from kimoro22 - English

  • The gold.

    • I am going to write about a history that I read time ago.
    • Many years ago, gold was known as one of the few elements found in its elemental state.
    • It was taken up by aborigines, to make ornamental things.
    • In fact, aborigines used an alloy named electrum as their expression of wealth.
    • Time later, it became a king who saw in the gold a potential to be a symbol of wealth.
    • This was King Croesus, and he wanted to mint a coinage to boost trade and banking in this lands.
    • Backed by state authorities, Croesus minted gold coins, however, for gold to hold greater value than native eletrum, he needed gold purity to be ascertainable by assay.
    • With this, gold became subject to comparative valuation and later in object of worship.
  • Hundreds of years later, a man was scathing about the corrup effect of gold.
  • He damned all those who traded with minted gold, because he thought this metal is the worst calamity of mankind.
  • The problem is not with the metal itself, but in the transformation the men suffer upon it.
  • Natural gold carries the light of the sun , he said, but minted gold is a symbol of perversion.
  • He thought the best is to banish this metal from the lands.
  • Many years later, some men used gold to make finery, instead, others used this precious metal for making chamberpots.

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