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My first day
Hi!!
- I'm charlie and i'm new here, and know speak english more or less, and i want improve the language.
- I'ld appreciate that you guys help me!!
- And if i can, i will help you!! Thanks!! :D

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- My first day
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- Hi!!
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- I'm charlie and i'm new here, and know speak english more or less, and i want improve the language.
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- I'm cCharlie and i'm new here~~, and know~~. I can speak eEnglish more or less, and iI want to improve ~~the language~~my abilities.
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- I'm cCharlie and iI'm new here~~, and~~. I know how to speak eEnglish more or less, and iI want improve with the language.
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- I'ld appreciate that you guys help me!!
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- I'ld appreciate ~~that~~if you guys could help me!!
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- And if i can, i will help you!! Thanks!! :D
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- Andlso if iI can, iI will help you too!! Thanks!! :D
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