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    • She is very interested in studying Natural Science and its related fields and she would like to start her study of Science in University AAA.
    • Studying in University AAA would be the critical nourishment for her future study in the advanced degrees that she plans to pursue.
    • On the one hand she is interested in contributing her skills to the place where needed.
    • In the volunteering center of her community, she participated in the planning process of one project as a coordinator.
    • On the other hand she likes to play guitar during her spare time.

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    • She is very interested in studying Natural Science and its related fields and she would like to start her study of Science in University AAA.
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    • She is very interested in studying Natural Science and its related fields, and she would like to start her study of Science inattend University AAA.
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    • Studying in University AAA would be the critical nourishment for her future study in the advanced degrees that she plans to pursue.
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    • Studying inat University AAA would be the critical nourishment for her future study in the advanced degrees that she plans to pursue.
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    • In the volunteering center of her community, she participated in the planning process of one project as a coordinator.
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    • In the volunteering center of her community, she participated in the planning process of one project as a coordinatorShe participated in a project as a coordinator for the planning process in the volunteer center of her community.
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