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    • However, if a museum covers educational and entertained areas, it would have a wider impact on young generations.
    • This because museums are regarded as a good relexation and rather than boring places by young people.
    • Parents are also likely to choose to visit museums as family atctivity, as their chilred would enjoy the atmosphere there.
    • This conbination can help museums to raise the profile on young people.

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