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    • On the other hand, museums pay attention on education could deepen people's understanding of history.
    • For example, exhibiting all kinds of antiques, holding acdemical lectures and providing explaination during visiting can allow young generations to connect to the past.
    • They may be astonished by the beaty of the artworks and admire their great ancestors, thereby having a sence of indentity.
    • As a result, young people would notice the importance of conserving historical relic.

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