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  • My application letter

  • "Dear Sir or Madam, My name is XXX XXX and I am currently attending the first year of a two-year post A-Level training course specialized in Personal Assistant in the CFA of Lyon, in France.
  • I have a sandwich job of personal assistant into the Climate, Environment, Health and Energy Department of the Rhône-Alpes region, at Lyon.
  • Within the framework of my training course, I have to make an internship abroad during 1 month at least, over the period from June 7th to August 31st.
    • My principal tasks are attached to secretarial work; filing and archiving documents, answering the telephone, organizing meeting and making travel arrangement etc. My researches turn me towards your company, where I noticed you proposed internships into the Business Development Department, and that would be a real opportunity for me to offer my services to a company I admire and I appreciate enormously.
    • Indeed, I always love cartoons, in particular the Muppets Show and the "Bear in the Big Blue House".
  • It is good to be in second childhood and announce to you my good mood as my work-taker, my sense of the organization and my great motivation to speak English.
  • That’s why I apply for every job in touch with my formation and my tasks in order to offer you my performances.
  • Looking forward to hearing from you soon, I give you my coordinates, Yours faithfully."

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  • Sentence 1
    • "Dear Sir or Madam, My name is XXX XXX and I am currently attending the first year of a two-year post A-Level training course specialized in Personal Assistant in the CFA of Lyon, in France.
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  • Sentence 2
    • I have a sandwich job of personal assistant into the Climate, Environment, Health and Energy Department of the Rhône-Alpes region, at Lyon.
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  • Sentence 3
    • Within the framework of my training course, I have to make an internship abroad during 1 month at least, over the period from June 7th to August 31st.
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  • Sentence 4
    • My principal tasks are attached to secretarial work; filing and archiving documents, answering the telephone, organizing meeting and making travel arrangement etc. My researches turn me towards your company, where I noticed you proposed internships into the Business Development Department, and that would be a real opportunity for me to offer my services to a company I admire and I appreciate enormously.
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    • My principal tasks are attached to secretarial work; filing and archiving documents, answering the telephone, organizing meeting and making travel arrangement etc.¶My researches turn me towards your company, where I noticed you proposed internships into the Business Development Department, and that would be a real opportunity for me to offer my services to a company that I admire and I appreciate enormously.
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    • My principal tasks are attached to secretarial work; filing and archiving documents, answering the telephone, organizing meeting and making travel arrangement, etc.¶My researches turn me towards your company, where I noticed you proposed internships into the Business Development Department, and that would be a real opportunity for me to offer my services to a company that I admire and I appreciate enormously.
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  • Sentence 6
    • It is good to be in second childhood and announce to you my good mood as my work-taker, my sense of the organization and my great motivation to speak English.
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