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  • Mini Essay: Imitation of Movie in Real Life

  • It is suggest that sometimes adolescent imitate what they have seen in movies, and some of them can badly hurt themself.
    • I am going to discuss this problem, and I give my opinion how to society can deal with that.
  • Nowadays, movies are released every week, and youngster are watching them without understanding what they saw imprinting on their real life.
    • To illustrate my point, some of the young man are often try the first time alcohol or drugs because they saw how a movie star had done it in a movie.
  • Sometimes it could be stunts or speeding on a road.
    • As a result young adult can do the same in real life and it can lead to damage their health, cause harm to others, and they even could be killed in an accident.
  • In my opinion, the government should restrict the law which uses for rate content in movies.
  • This law have to limit age under 21 to forbid seeing things like alcohol, drugs and dangerous stunts in movies.
    • To conclude, there are so much content in movies that be able to affect behavior young people in bad way.
  • Therefore, only the government could help to solve this issue and save health and life of young people.

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