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English in life
To my mind, English is very important nowadays.
So, I would like to improve my Engling and go away from my country.
And I think,that you can help me.

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- English in life
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句子 1
- To my mind, English is very important nowadays.
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句子 2
- So, I would like to improve my Engling and go away from my country.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- And I think,that you can help me.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3