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  • My life

  • Hi :) So...
    • I'm gonna start from the top of this story.
  • I was born in Frebruary, 1998.
  • My parents are José and Consuelo.
    • When I was 2, my mother had another daughter, so now I have a sister, her name is Ana, and I love her.
    • I have a cat too, her name is Carly and she often sleeps with me... in my bed... Well.
  • Now I'm studying 3rd ESO, I think it is 9th grade in USA, I'm not sure.
    • Last summer, an american girl came to my house.
    • She was so shy, but we became good friends.
    • Talking about friends, my best friends names are Andrea, Desi, Laura, Sergio and Hazael.
  • I love them, because they give me support when I need it.
  • I don't know what to talk about now...
    • I love music, above all I love the Beatles, Queen, classic rock in general.
  • I like Justin Timberlake too...
    • He's so damn hot... Bye :)

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