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- Happy birthday！
- Today is my birthday.I signed up for a marathon.It's first time I join a sprot games.I want chang my life.I want be a another one who have a free spirit.

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- Happy birthday！
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- Happy birthday！!
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- Today is my birthday.I signed up for a marathon.It's first time I join a sprot games.I want chang my life.I want be a another one who have a free spirit.
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- Today is my birthday. I signed up for a marathon. It's the first time I ~~join a sprot games.~~have ever entered a sports competition. I want to change my life. I want to be a ~~anoth~~different per sone, who haves a free spirit.
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- Today is my birthday. I signed up for a marathon. It's first time I ~~join a sprot games.~~have entered a sports competition. I want to change my life. I want to be a ~~anoth~~different per sone w~~ho have~~ith a free spirit.
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