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Big surprise
- Yesterday I found my toothpaste was over.
- So I decided to go shopping to buy some stuffs.
- When I came to the shop I decided to try something new.
- I took one black box where they wrote "for the strong spirit persons" That was a big surprise for me when I squeezed some on my toothbrush. It was black.
Have you guys ever tried black toothpaste?
That's very funny.

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- Big surprise
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Mening 1
- Yesterday I found my toothpaste was over.
  Rösta nu!
- Yesterday I found out that my toothpaste ~~was over~~ran out.
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Mening 2
- So I decided to go shopping to buy some stuffs.
  Rösta nu!
- So I decided to go shopping to buy some stuffs.
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Mening 3
- When I came to the shop I decided to try something new.
  Rösta nu!
- When I ~~came to~~arrived at the shop I decided to try something new.
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Mening 4
- I took one black box where they wrote "for the strong spirit persons" That was a big surprise for me when I squeezed some on my toothbrush. It was black.
  Rösta nu!
- I took one black box where they wrote "for the strong spirited persons" ~~¶Tha~~. It was a big surprise for me when I squeezed some on my toothbrush. It was black.!
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Mening 5
- Have you guys ever tried black toothpaste?
  Rösta nu!
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Mening 6
- That's very funny.
  Rösta nu!
- LÄGG TILL en NY KORRIGERING - Mening 6