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Text from Darina1997 - English

  • Help me to correct my translation of the russian song, please=)

  • Icicle drowned in a glass.
    • It disappeared and I'm sorry for it Your eyes said me something It's getting hot because of it It snows and there is a bad weather outside the window I feel warm when you are near There are no people happier than me, believe me under gentle, tender eye.
    • chorus Your eyes have colour of whiskey They are so near-near to me Your eyes have a colour of happiness They will safe me from a trouble I feel drunk because you are near I drowned like an icicle in a goblet For me it was like an award, that your eyes told me There is the bad weather and slush Misfortune is walking around the world.
    • I feel like to cry, for some reason.
    • Probably it's because of my happiness

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Sentence 2
    • It disappeared and I'm sorry for it Your eyes said me something It's getting hot because of it It snows and there is a bad weather outside the window I feel warm when you are near There are no people happier than me, believe me under gentle, tender eye.
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    • It disappeared and I'm sorry for it¶Your eyes saitold me something¶It's getting hot because of it¶It snows and there is a bad weather outside the window¶I feel warm when you are near¶There are no people happier than me, believe me under this gentle, tender eye.
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  • Sentence 3
    • chorus Your eyes have colour of whiskey They are so near-near to me Your eyes have a colour of happiness They will safe me from a trouble I feel drunk because you are near I drowned like an icicle in a goblet For me it was like an award, that your eyes told me There is the bad weather and slush Misfortune is walking around the world.
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    • chorus¶Your eyes have the colours of whiskey¶They are so near-, near to me¶Your eyes have a colour of happiness¶They will safve me from a trouble¶I feel drunk because you are near¶I drowned like an icicle in a goblet¶For me it was like an award, that your eyes told me¶There is the bad weather and slush¶Misfortune is walking around the world.
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