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    • Hi. my name is Patrizia and i from Italy near Rome, my city is a nice city but don't right for me. there isn't a possibility to work because is a small city and the people lived here don't be comfortable for this i wuold going away. i have to learn english alone for this motive. i hope that someone i help me in this adventure. thank you.
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    • Hi. my name is Patrizia and i from Italy near Rome, my city is a nice city but don't right for me. there isn't a possibility to work because is a small city and the people lived here don't be comfortable for this i wuold going away. i have to learn english alone for this motive. i hope that someone i help me in this adventure. thank you.
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    • Hi. my name is Patrizia and i am from Italy near Rome, my city is a nice city but doit isn't the right city for me . there isn't a possibility to work because it is a small city and the people who lived here don't beare not comfortable for thisto be with. That's why i wuould going away. ilike to leave this city. That is why I have to learn eEnglish alone for this motiveby myself. iI hope that someone iwill help me in this adventure. tThank you.
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    • Hi. mMy name is Patrizia and iI am from Italy, near Rome, m. My city is such a nice city but don'place for everyone but it isn’t a right city for me. there isn't a possibility to work because is a small city andAs this is a small city chances of getting job is very less, so that the people liveding here don't be in an uncomfortable for this i wuold going away. i have to learn english alone for this motivesituation too. I am thinking of moving out of my city now and for that I have to learn and improve my English skills. iI hope that someone iwould help me in this adventurematter. tThank you.
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