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    • My Short Discription of EBay's business model

    • The e-commerce platform of EBay has got two different business models.
  • First, there is the auction.
    • Bidder can bid for/on stuff that people no longer need and the sellers upload their articles well illustrated either free of charge without a price starting at zero or with paying a low fee at a higher starting price.
    • Secondly, there are the fixed priced offers where buyers can accept the offered prices or hand in/suggest their preferred prices to the sellers.
  • In addition, there is the rating system.
    • Both sellers and bidders can grad each other after each transaction to be aware of/protect from ‘rotten apples’ within the e-commerce platform.

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    • Bidder can bid for/on stuff that people no longer need and the sellers upload their articles well illustrated either free of charge without a price starting at zero or with paying a low fee at a higher starting price.
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    • BiddThe buyers can bid for/on stuffon items that people no longer need, and the sellers upload their articles well illustrated either free of charge without a price starting at zero or with paying a low fee at a higher startingstuff accompanied by a description (either for free with the bidding starting at $0, or they pay a small fee in order to start at a higher price).
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    • Secondly, there are the fixed priced offers where buyers can accept the offered prices or hand in/suggest their preferred prices to the sellers.
      투표하세요!
    • Secondly, there are the fixed priced offers, where buyers can either accept the offered prices or hand in/suggest their preferred prices to the sellers.
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    • Both sellers and bidders can grad each other after each transaction to be aware of/protect from ‘rotten apples’ within the e-commerce platform.
      투표하세요!
    • Both sellers and bidduyers can grade each other after each transaction to be aware of/protect, which protects the EBay community from ‘rotten apples’ within the e-commerce platform.
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