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Hobby
- I love to try something sport when I have the time for do it.
- I play soccer and in the free time I do skateboarding.
- I wish try snowboarding next winter.

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句子 1
- I love to try something sport when I have the time for do it.
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- I lovike to try something new in sport when I have tha free time ~~for~~to do it.
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- I ~~lov~~would like to try some~~thing~~ sports, when I have the time ~~for do it~~to practice them.
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句子 2
- I play soccer and in the free time I do skateboarding.
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- I play soccer and in ~~the~~ free time I do skateboarding.
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句子 3
- I wish try snowboarding next winter.
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- I wish to try snowboarding next winter. ¶
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- I wish i get the chance to try snowboarding next winter. ¶
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