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my favourite day
my favourite day is Saturday, because it is a free day.
- I get up at 10 0’clock,i have breakfast with milk and cookies and then i do a shower.
- Around 11 o’clock i go for a walk whit my mother or i go to the supermarket.
Usually i have lunch with my grandparents and then, in the afternoon i relax or watch tv.
In the evening i eat pizza whit my friends and we go to the pub.

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- my favourite day is Saturday, because it is a free day.
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- I get up at 10 0’clock,i have breakfast with milk and cookies and then i do a shower.
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- I get up at 10 0’clock,i have breakfast with milk and cookies and then i dohave a shower.
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- Around 11 o’clock i go for a walk whit my mother or i go to the supermarket.
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- Around 11 o’clock i go for a walk whith my mother or i go to the supermarket.
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- Usually i have lunch with my grandparents and then, in the afternoon i relax or watch tv.
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- In the evening i eat pizza whit my friends and we go to the pub.
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