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  • An Interesting Trip

    • Last July, I had a trip to Lam Dong, a highland province in South of Vietnam with my friends.
    • Our group included of five members.
  • We departed from Ho Chi Minh city.
    • After taking a coach of six hours, we arrived Lam Dong.
    • Usually, it's colder here than other areas in South of Vietnam.
    • However, at that time, it's summer, so we don't feel cold.
    • It was just a little bit cool.
    • Since we started that journey at six o'clock, we got off the coach at midnight.
    • Then I phone to my girl friend, who is native of this province.
    • After waiting for half of hour, she drove there and took us to her house.
  • Because we were all drowsy, we all went to bed shortly after getting her home.
    • Next morning, after one night sleeping like a baby, I woke up cheerily.
  • We had a light breakfast before departing to Elephant Fall, a wild landscape.
  • It hadn't been yet affected much by tourism activities.
    • We stayed there during morning and afternoon to discover it's caves and falls, and to take photos.
    • It was really interesting to take photos with majestic scenery.
  • In the evening, we left there and drove to a restaurant in Da Lat city (capital of Lam Dong province) to have dinner.
  • Then, we stayed in a small hotel in this city.
  • The day after, we visited Langbiang, a poetic mountain.
    • Walking along the lane in the pine forest, we reached the top of this mountain, took some photos and finally took lunch before walking down the mountain.
  • At night, we went to Cho Dem (special type of market which only opens at night in Da lat) to buy warm clothes and souvenirs.
    • In last day of the journey, we visited Truc Lam pagoda, Love Valley and Tuyen Lam lake.
  • Being a tourism city, no wonder Da Lat has many landscape to visit.

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