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    • a good day

    • a good day a good day I had a good day yesterday.I spent it in pleasent fuss.I went to the shopping and was buying presents with my friends.Then I turned back at home and my friends came to me.We were cooking when my sister arrived.She bought presents for us.The presents were wonderful,funny and very unexpected.We passed the time very amusing.I hope that such a days will be more often...

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    • a good day a good day I had a good day yesterday.I spent it in pleasent fuss.I went to the shopping and was buying presents with my friends.Then I turned back at home and my friends came to me.We were cooking when my sister arrived.She bought presents for us.The presents were wonderful,funny and very unexpected.We passed the time very amusing.I hope that such a days will be more often...
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    • aA good day,¶ a good day. I had a good day yesterday. I spent it in pleaseant fuss. I went to the shopping and was buyingmall and bought presents with my friends. Then I returned back at home andwith my friends came to me.We were. Whilst cooking when, my sister arrived. She bought presents for us. The presents were wonderful, funny and very unexpected. We passed the time very amusing.I hope that such a days will be more often...had a nice time. I hope we have many more days like this.
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    • a good day¶ a good day I had a good day yesterday.I spent it in and it make a pleaseant fuss. over me. I went to the shopping and was buyingbrought presents with my friends.Then I returned back at home andwith my friends came to me.We were cooking when my sister arrived.. Then my sister arrived and we were cooking at that time. She bought presents for us. The presents were wonderful,funny and very unexpected. We passed the time very amusing.ly. I hope that such a days will be more often...
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