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Text from rangdong27 - English

  • The moon

  • Scientists had told us so much about the moon that it is fairly easy to imagine what it would be like to go there.
    • As there is no air or water, there can be no creatures.
  • There is no variety of scenery either.
  • For mile after mile, there are only flat plains of dust with mountains around them.
  • Above, the sun and stars shine in a black sky.
    • If you step out of the mountains shadows, it will mean moving from the severe cold into great heat.
    • These extreme temperatures continually break rocks away from the surface of mountains.
  • The moon is also a very silent world, for sound waves can only travel through air.
  • But beyond the broken horizon, you see a friendly sight.
    • Our earth is shinning more brightly than the stars.
  • From this distance, it looks like an immense ball, colored blue, green and brown.

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