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    • Today is the third of January and nobody works in Russia because of the New Year Eve.I have celebrated it at home with my relatives.To be honest,I would like to celebrate it with friends ,but my parents didn't let me.Unfortunately,some of our plans don't come true and it hurts.Anyway,there are many advantages ,for instance,I have talked with my grandmother about her live ,and with my cousin we had such a lovely conversation.

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    • Today is the third of January and nobody works in Russia because of the New Year Eve.I have celebrated it at home with my relatives.To be honest,I would like to celebrate it with friends ,but my parents didn't let me.Unfortunately,some of our plans don't come true and it hurts.Anyway,there are many advantages ,for instance,I have talked with my grandmother about her live ,and with my cousin we had such a lovely conversation.
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    • Today is the third of January and nobody works in Russia because of the New Year's Eve.I have celebrated it at home with my relatives.To be honest,I would like to celebrate it with friends ,but my parents didn't let me.Unfortunately,some of our plans don't come true and it hurts.Anyway,there are many advantages ,for instance,I have talked with my grandmother about her live ,and with my cousin we had such a lovely conversation.
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