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Text from Darina1997 - English

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    • Excuse me.I'm sorry that I offended you.(But remember you permitted me to ask rude questions yourself=)) Sometimes I say first and only then I think.
    • If you don't want to be my friend I understand) And answer to your question: I AM here to learn english.
    • But I just wanted to learn something about your life.Thanks for your complement to my english=)It still is pleasant even if it is a flattery) If I understood you rightly you wanted to send me a link where you an check your speLLing=)If it is nonsense that I didn't understand your attitude to russian language in your first letter because I didn't translate it rightly, then what is your guess about it, why then I thought you don't want to learn russian.
    • Please don't suspect me to lie you all the time.
    • It's the Internet, you don't need to lie here) I disagree with your views on faith.
    • Whether God exist or doesn't exist, faith in Him exist and EVERY person need it however strong he or she is.
    • I am weak and I admit it)Let's not discuss this issue any more) That you too like when someone calls you a child let's play a game.
    • 'Yes no or it doesn't matters' -it's my favourite verbal game, I used to play it at school during breaks.I tell you a story and then I ask some questions.
    • You have to answer them but not directly.You may ask only questions answer on which may be yes or no. If your question has nothing to do with clue to my guess I'll answer It doesn't matters.
    • The story is: She asked him 'Do you love me'.He was silent.
    • She asked a second time.
    • He again was silent.
    • She asked third time.
  • He answered 'yes'.
    • And just that second she died.Why did she die7

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Sentence 1
    • Excuse me.I'm sorry that I offended you.(But remember you permitted me to ask rude questions yourself=)) Sometimes I say first and only then I think.
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    • Excuse me. I'm sorry that I offended you.(B, but remember you permitted me to ask rude questions yourself=)). Sometimes I say first and only then I thindo not think before I speak.
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  • Sentence 2
    • If you don't want to be my friend I understand) And answer to your question: I AM here to learn english.
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    • If you decide that you don't want to be my friend I understand) And answer to your question: I AM here to learn english.anymore, I understand.
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  • Sentence 3
    • But I just wanted to learn something about your life.Thanks for your complement to my english=)It still is pleasant even if it is a flattery) If I understood you rightly you wanted to send me a link where you an check your speLLing=)If it is nonsense that I didn't understand your attitude to russian language in your first letter because I didn't translate it rightly, then what is your guess about it, why then I thought you don't want to learn russian.
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    • But I just wanted to learn something about your life.Thanks for your complement to my english=)It still is pleasant even if it is a flattery) If I understood you rightly you wanted to send me a link where you an check your speLLlling=)If it is nonsense that I didn't understand your attitude to the russian language in your first letter because I didn't translate it righcorrectly, then what is your guess about it, why then I thought you don't want to learn russian.
    • But I just wanted to learn something about your life. Thanks for your complement ton my english=)It still is pleasant even if it is a flattery) If I understood you rightly you wanted to send me a link where you an check your speLLing=)improving english. Correct me if I misunderstood but I'm guessing you wanted to send me a link to a spell check website. If it is nonsense that I didn't understand your attitude to rthe Russian language in your first letter because I didn't translate it righcorrectly, then what isare your guess about it, why then I thought you don't want toexact thoughts? What gave me the impression that you are not interested in learn ring Russian.?
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  • Sentence 6
    • Whether God exist or doesn't exist, faith in Him exist and EVERY person need it however strong he or she is.
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    • Whether God exist or doesn't exist, faith in Him exists and EVERY person needs it however strong he or she is.
    • Whether God exist or doesn't exisnot, faith in Hhim exist and EVERY person need it however strong he or sheregardless of level of spirituality needs ist.
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  • Sentence 7
    • I am weak and I admit it)Let's not discuss this issue any more) That you too like when someone calls you a child let's play a game.
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    • I am weak and, I admit. it)Let's not discuss this issue any more). That you too like it too when someone calls you a child let'sand asks you to play a game.
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  • Sentence 8
    • 'Yes no or it doesn't matters' -it's my favourite verbal game, I used to play it at school during breaks.I tell you a story and then I ask some questions.
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    • 'Yes, no or it doesn't matters' -i that's my favourite verbal game,. I used to play it atthat game in school during breakcess. I tell youwould tell another person a story and then I ask some questions.
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  • Sentence 9
    • You have to answer them but not directly.You may ask only questions answer on which may be yes or no. If your question has nothing to do with clue to my guess I'll answer It doesn't matters.
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    • You have to answer them but not directly .You may ask only questions answer on which mawhose answers must only be 'yes' or 'no.' If yourthe answer to the question hais nothing to do with clue to my guess I'll answer Ieither yes nor no, then 'it doesn't matters.' is applied.
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