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Hi everyone!!!
Hi everyone, my name is Rubén, I'm from Venezuela and i'm practicing english.
- If you want learn or practice spanish, contact me and share our languages.
Regards and Blessings.

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- Hi everyone!!!
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- Hi everyone, my name is Rubén, I'm from Venezuela and i'm practicing english.
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- If you want learn or practice spanish, contact me and share our languages.
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- If you want learn or practice spanish, contact me so we cand share our/each other's languages.
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- If you want to learn or practice sSpanish, contact me and we can share our languages.
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- Regards and Blessings.
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