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- Hello everyone!
- On this fresh new year, I have decided to learn or improve new languages.
- So do not hesitate to engage a conversation, I'm open minded :).

Jamel1234January 2014투표하세요!
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- Hello everyone!
  투표하세요!
- Hello everyone!I want to learn English.Please help me.
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- On this fresh new year, I have decided to learn or improve new languages.
  투표하세요!
- ~~On this fresh~~This new year, I have decided to learn ~~or improve~~ new languages.
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- ~~On this fresh~~During this new year, I have decided to learn orand improve ~~new~~upon many languages.
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- So do not hesitate to engage a conversation, I'm open minded :).
  투표하세요!
- So please do not hesitate to ~~engage a conversation~~contact me, I'm open minded :).
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- SoPlease do not hesitate to ~~engage~~begin a conversation,. I'm very open minded :).
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- So do not hesitate to engage in a conversation with me, I'm open minded :).
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