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  • My Food Theory

    • I know little about cooking , nevertheless I have been sticked to a strict theory about what should be eaten and what should be not.
    • It is shameful to admit that once during a business trip I have spent several months eating nothing but scrambled eggs and stews cooked by myself .
    • Ridiculously,even then, I would not allow myself to eat any food that was unfresh , or greasy ,or too salty.The theory, which has poisoned me for so long is this: less fresh food contains less nutrients, such as vitamins or proteins ,and the consumption of oil and salt would do harm to body by speeding up the ageing process.
    • Tracing back the roots of this theory, I must mention two historical events: the first is the book I have read about ancient Japanese buddhist , who would always eat very little Sushi made with extremely fresh ingredients.
    • The second is that I used to consume too much oil and salt during my university years.
    • Now, I believe I will always choose light food, and preach the benefits of a healthy diet tirelessly.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Vakya 1
    • I know little about cooking , nevertheless I have been sticked to a strict theory about what should be eaten and what should be not.
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    • I know little about cooking , nevertheless I have been stiucked to a strict theory about what should be eaten and what should be not.
    • I know little about cooking , nevertheless I have been stiucked to a strict theory about what should be eaten and what should be notand should not be eaten.
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    • I know little about cooking , nevertheless, I have been stickeding to a strict theory about what should be eaten and what should be notand should not be eaten.
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  • Vakya 2
    • It is shameful to admit that once during a business trip I have spent several months eating nothing but scrambled eggs and stews cooked by myself .
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    • It is shameful to admit that once, during a business trip, I have spent several months eating nothing but scrambled eggs and stews cooked by myself .
    • It is shameful to admit that once during a business trip I have spent several months eating nothing but scrambled eggs and stews I cooked all by myself .
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 2
  • Vakya 3
    • Ridiculously,even then, I would not allow myself to eat any food that was unfresh , or greasy ,or too salty.The theory, which has poisoned me for so long is this: less fresh food contains less nutrients, such as vitamins or proteins ,and the consumption of oil and salt would do harm to body by speeding up the ageing process.
      Vote now!
    • Ridiculously, even then, I would not allow myself to eat any food that was unot fresh , or greasy , or too salty. The theory, which has poisoned me for so long is thise following: less fresh food contains less nutrients, such as vitamins or proteins , and the consumption of oil and salt would do harm to one's body by speeding up the ageing process.
    • Ridiculously,even then, I would not allow myself to eat any food that was unfresh , or greasy ,or, too salty. or not fresh. The theory, which has poisoned me for so long is this:- less fresh food contains less nutrients, such as vitamins or proteins ,and the consumption of oil and salt would do harm to the body by speeding up the ageing process.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Ridiculously, even then, I would not allow myself to eat any food that was unn't fresh , toor greasy , or too salty. The theory, which has poisoned me for so long, is this: less fresh food contains less nutrients, such as vitamins or proteins , and the consumption of oil and salt would do harm to the (or "my") body by speeding up the ageing process.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 3
  • Vakya 4
    • Tracing back the roots of this theory, I must mention two historical events: the first is the book I have read about ancient Japanese buddhist , who would always eat very little Sushi made with extremely fresh ingredients.
      Vote now!
    • Tracing back the roots of this theory, I must mention two historical events: tperiods. The first one is the book I have read about ancient Japanese bBuddhist , who would always eat very little Sushi made with extremely fresh ingredients.
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    • Tracing back the roots of this theory, I must mention two historical events: tThe first is the book I have read about ancient Japanese bBuddhist , who would always eat very little Sushi made withof (with works, but "of" is a better option) extremely fresh ingredients.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4
  • Vakya 5
  • Vakya 6
    • Now, I believe I will always choose light food, and preach the benefits of a healthy diet tirelessly.
      Vote now!
    • Now, I believe I will always choose light food, and preach the benefits of a healthy diet tirelesslyI vowed to always choose the healthy option and to encourage healthy lifestyles.
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    • Now, I believe I will always choose light food, and preach the benefits of a healthy diet tirelessly.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 6