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- I have a smartphone is the same him.So that i want to buy a new wooden colour case for it so it's different his.

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- ~~same~~I have a smartphone the same of his . So that ..... So it's going to be different .
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- I have a smartphone is the same him.So that i want to buy a new wooden colour case for it so it's different his.
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- I have a smartphone is the same ~~him.So that i~~as his so I want to buy a new wooden coloured case ~~for~~so it ~~so it's~~will differ~~ent~~( from his.) ¶
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- I have a smart-phone is the same ~~him.So that i want to buy a new wooden colour case for it so it's~~of his but I have inttention to make it different ~~his. ¶~~.
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- I have athe same smartphone ~~is the same him.So that i~~as him, so I want to buy a new wooden colour case for it so it's different to his. ¶
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