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- I am Arabian , I study in royal Jordanian Academy , I,m going to be pilot after 2 years and i want to learn English because it's necessary for my work

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- I am Arabian , I study in royal Jordanian Academy , I,m going to be pilot after 2 years and i want to learn English because it's necessary for my work
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- ~~I a~~Hello! I'm Arabian ~~, I~~and I'm study in rg at the Royal Jordanian Academy ,. I,'m going to be pilot ~~after~~in 2 years and iI want to learn English because it~~'s necessary for my work~~ will be an important aspect of my job.
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- I am an Arab~~ian~~ /I am Arabic, I study ~~in r~~at the Royal Jordanian Academy , I,'m going to be a pilot ~~after~~in 2 years and iI want to learn English because it' is necessary/important/essential for my ~~work~~job.
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- I am Arabian ,. I study ~~in r~~at Royal Jordanian Academy ~~, I,m going to~~. I would be pilot ~~after~~in 2 years ~~and i~~.I want to learn English because it's necessary for my work.
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- I am Arabian ,and I study ~~in r~~at the Royal Jordanian Academy ~~, I,m going to~~. I will be a pilot after 2 years and iI want to learn English because it's necessary for my work.
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