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Text from vaness182 - English

    • I happy.

    • Today is Saturday, January 12th, today I surprise myself when this morning was walking from my home to mall, when I cross the park, and de avenue I listened a laugh and I though "I know who is laughing".
    • In this moment I felt a hand on my back and I shouted.
    • I turned around and I saw her, my girlfriend while she said me: "don't shout, it's me" I felt a big scare, but also a biggest happiness.
    • After that, I went to the mall to saw with my mommy a garb but my mommy can't went.
    • Then, she and I went to the lens store (she force me) because she wanted give mi a white contact lenses.
    • I want, but I don't have interest to buy.
    • She have violets contact lenses and now I have white it.
    • Later, when together we returned, saw a old man was selling watermelon, she got crave, I too.
    • The old man sold us one, then , we went home, my mommy cut the watermelon.
    • When we upstairs to my bedroom, I say her: "let me relish your piece", she close me her piece and I said her: "not noot".
    • I close her, I took my piece and touch in her cheek, After of bite my piece I said her: "omm my piece is with Xiomy's flavor".
  • She started to laugh and I felt very happy.
    • I miss so much.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English