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Text from Giorgia9619 - English

    • Hi my name is Giorgia

    • I live in Italy but I come from Albania.
    • I have three sisters and I'm the oldest. my hobbies are dancing,running, watching television and reading novels.
    • I also love doing shopping, and I think I'm quiet good at it.
  • Now I'm very happy because I'm at home and not at school thanks to the Christmas holidays.
    • I hope to find new friends here that can help me to improve my skills in English.
    • Yesterday I was in a concert with all my family.

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