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    • My Line Manager, My Teacher & My Friend

    • Three years ago, I prepared to resign my Intern job and to hunt a full-time job.
    • At that time, I met my second line manager on my life.
    • Then, she had a short interview to me and asked me whether I wanted to join her team.
    • Without any doubts, I said, yes.
    • I must admit she, my new Malaysian boss, gave me a deep impressive.
    • In China, some businesses are under table.
    • She known it but she refused to be a dark one.
    • What I learnt from her, it’s not only about business, knowledge, but also how to conduct well in society.
  • Unfortunately, she was failed on political struggles.
  • That anything she has built for the company was stolen by villains.
    • When she left this company, I had made a decision to quit from this company as well.
    • And now, she works for a better job on a better company.
    • I really feel happy for her.
    • And for me, the only one pity thing is that I can not learn from her.
    • Wish she all the best of 2014.

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