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  • Sandy has again become a hurricane approaching the U.S.

    • Sandy has again become a hurricane approaching the U.S. east coast, after briefly downgraded to a tropical storm, said Saturday the U.S.
  • National Hurricane Center (NHC) in Miami.
    • U.S. meteorologists recorded winds of up to 120 km / h while Sandy, who has already been at least 44 deaths in the Caribbean, moved north into the Atlantic, approaching the densely populated coast the American.
  • At 12:00 GMT, Hurricane Sandy, Category 1 on the Saffir-Simpson has 5, was 540 km southeast of Charleston, South Carolina (southeast), advancing some 17 km / h.
    • Meteorologists expect the coast from Virginia to New York not only "heavy rainfall, high winds and climbs significant water", but also the interior, significant snowfall, according U.S. weather service.
    • The Governor of the State of New York has declared a state of emergency while Mayor Michael Bloomberg urged residents to be well informed without panic.
    • The mayor of the capital, Washington, was also declared a state of emergency also triggered in Maryland, Pennsylvania, Virginia and North Carolina county.
    • Sandy, nicknamed "Frankenstorm" approach to Halloween (Wednesday) in the United States, has so far been 44 deaths, including one in Jamaica, the Bahamas, 29 in Haiti, 11 in Cuba two in the Dominican Republic.

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    • Sandy has again become a hurricane approaching the U.S. east coast, after briefly downgraded to a tropical storm, said Saturday the U.S.
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    • Sandy has again become a hurricane approaching the U.S. east coast, of USA after briefly being downgraded to a tropical storm, said Saturday the U.S. on Saturday
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    • U.S. meteorologists recorded winds of up to 120 km / h while Sandy, who has already been at least 44 deaths in the Caribbean, moved north into the Atlantic, approaching the densely populated coast the American.
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    • U.S. meteorologists recorded winds of up to 120 km / h while Sandy, who has already been the cause of at least 44 deaths in the Caribbean, moved north into the Atlantic, approaching the densely populated coast theof American.
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    • U.S. meteorologists recorded winds of up to 120 km / h while hurricane Sandy, whoich has already beencaused at least 44 deaths in the Caribbean, moved north into the Atlantic, approaching the densely populated coast theof American.
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    • U.S. meteorologists recorded winds of up to speed of about 120 km / h while hurricane Sandy, whoich has already been at least 44 deaths led to nearly 44 deaths till now in the Caribbean, moved north into the Atlantic, approaching the densely populated coast theof American.
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    • At 12:00 GMT, Hurricane Sandy, Category 1 on the Saffir-Simpson has 5, was 540 km southeast of Charleston, South Carolina (southeast), advancing some 17 km / h.
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    • Meteorologists expect the coast from Virginia to New York not only "heavy rainfall, high winds and climbs significant water", but also the interior, significant snowfall, according U.S. weather service.
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    • Meteorologists expect the coast from Virginia to New York not only "heavy rainfall, high winds and climbs significant water", but also the interior water levels rising significantly"along the coast from Virginia to New York but also inland, significant snowfall,s is expected according to the U.S. weather service.
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    • Meteorologists expect the coast from Virginia to New York not only " heavy rainfall, high winds and climbs significant water", but also the interior, significant snowfallrise of water level along the coast of Virginia till New York but also significant snowfall in the interiors of these coast , according U.S. weather service.
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    • The Governor of the State of New York has declared a state of emergency while Mayor Michael Bloomberg urged residents to be well informed without panic.
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    • The Governor of the State of New York has declared a state of emergency while Mayor Michael Bloomberg urged residents to be well informedstay alert without panic.king
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    • The mayor of the capital, Washington, was also declared a state of emergency also triggered in Maryland, Pennsylvania, Virginia and North Carolina county.
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    • The mayor of the capital, Washington, wasD. C. also declared a state of emergency also triggered infter Maryland, Pennsylvania, Virginia, and North Carolina county.
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    • Sandy, nicknamed "Frankenstorm" approach to Halloween (Wednesday) in the United States, has so far been 44 deaths, including one in Jamaica, the Bahamas, 29 in Haiti, 11 in Cuba two in the Dominican Republic.
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    • Sandy, nicknamed "Frankenstorm" approach to Halloween (Wednesday) in the United States, has so far there have been 44 deaths, including one in Jamaica, the Bahamas, 29 in Haiti, 11 in Cuba two in the Dominican Republic.
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