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Text from CEDRICLANARRE - English

  • Practice makes perfect

    • They say practice makes perfect; I am a perfectionist both as a language learner and as an artist.
    • I’m a freestyle fanatic, so one of my goals is to be able to rhyme off the top of my dome; it must be automatic like martial arts techniques you’ve been repeating for years before you can apply them when you’re competing.
  • Without even thinking, you make the right move.
  • I try to practice all day, every day.
  • I’m serious but I can’t say I don’t have time to play, because I have found ways to keep learning while playing games, which makes it quite fun to strive for my aims.
  • I am looking for players, the more the merrier, not for followers, because I am not a leader.
  • So apart from studying, I have started networking, searching online though I prefer to play in person.

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    • I’m a freestyle fanatic, so one of my goals is to be able to rhyme off the top of my dome; it must be automatic like martial arts techniques you’ve been repeating for years before you can apply them when you’re competing.
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    • I’m a freestyle fanatic, so one of my goals is to be able to rhyme off the top of my dome; i. It must be automatic like the martial arts techniques you’ve been repeating for years before you can apply them when you’re competing.
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    • I’m a freestyle fanatic, so one of my goals is to be able to rhyme off the top of my dome; it must be as automatic likeas martial arts techniques you’ve been repeating for years before you can apply them when you’re competing.
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    • I’m serious but I can’t say I don’t have time to play, because I have found ways to keep learning while playing games, which makes it quite fun to strive for my aims.
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sasijayaram profile picture sasijayaram3 weeks ago
They say practice makes perfect; I am a perfectionist both as a language learner and as an artist.
They say practice makes perfect; I am astrive for perfectionist in both as a language learnering and as an artistry.


sasijayaram profile picture sasijayaram3 weeks ago
I’m a freestyle fanatic, so one of my goals is to be able to rhyme off the top of my dome; it must be automatic like martial arts techniques you’ve been repeating for years before you can apply them when you’re competing.
I’m a freestyle fanatic, so one of my goals is to be able to rhyme off the top of my dome; it must be as automatic likeas martial arts techniques you’ve been repeating for years before you can apply them when you’re competing.
AussieInBg profile picture AussieInBg3 weeks ago
I’m a freestyle fanatic, so one of my goals is to be able to rhyme off the top of my dome; it must be automatic like martial arts techniques you’ve been repeating for years before you can apply them when you’re competing.
I’m a freestyle fanatic, so one of my goals is to be able to rhyme off the top of my dome; i. It must be automatic like the martial arts techniques you’ve been repeating for years before you can apply them when you’re competing.
No need to overuse semicolons in writing.”you’re” is somewhat redundant here in your case.