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A meeting of friends
- Bob is going to visit his friend which live in outskirts.
- His friend’s name is Fred.
- They have been friendly since school time.
- Bob practically came to the new address of Fred, he never was here.
- Fred is at home waiting him.
- They agreed to meet each other two days ago. Bob: Hi Fred !
- Finally I found your address.
- It wasn’t easy.
- I had to stop many people to ask.
- They were very kind giving to me the right way. Fred: Imagine.
- Come in please.
- I will show you my mew apartment.
- Look, there is hall, it’s pretty large and cozy.
- On the right on me there is bathroom and on the left there is my bedroom.
- I did a small repair here because there were some damages on the wall and others things.
- Bob: I find the apartment a little, but is pretty comfortable.
- How much do you pay for rent ?
- Fred: Six hundred dollars per month.
- It’s not expensive and I like the neighbourhood here.
- There are some parcs and attractions here.
- My neighbours look kind and welcome.
- Bob: That’s nice you like it !
- Sorry, I can’t stay for a long time.
- I promised to mom to back home at 3 pm.
- Let’s meet on the weekend here, is that okay for you ?
- Fred: I’ll be free only on Sunday.
- Call me before you come here, okay ? Bob: Agreed. See you. Fred: Bye-bye.
- Have a nice day.
- Dima79
4 weeks ago
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