Corrections

Text from summer_2023 - English

  • My family

    • I have a big family.
    • My father is a tall man, he is very humorous, and he brought us a lot of joy.
  • My mother is a kind and patient woman.
  • She takes good care of the whole family.
    • My brother is a good-natured man, he rarely gets angry, and he is very good at singing.
  • His wife is a tall woman.
  • They love each other very much.
  • They have two children, a girl and a boy.
  • My cousins are very cute, I like them very much.
  • My grandmother is an old, kind lady, She is 80 years old, and she lives with my uncle.
    • I don’t see her often, but we have video chat sometimes.
    • We also have four dogs and one cat, I love animals very much.
  • My family is a really big one, Am I?

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

Corrections and Comments

PatMo profile picture PatMoDecember 2023
My brother is a good-natured man, he rarely gets angry, and he is very good at singing.
My brother is a good-natured man, he who rarely gets angry, and, he is very good at singing.


PatMo profile picture PatMoDecember 2023
We also have four dogs and one cat, I love animals very much.
We alsoI love animals very much. We have four dogs and one cat, I love animals very much.
PatMo profile picture PatMoDecember 2023
I don’t see her often, but we have video chat sometimes.
I don’t see her often, but we have video chat sometimes.
PatMo profile picture PatMoDecember 2023
My father is a tall man, he is very humorous, and he brought us a lot of joy.
My father is a tall man, he is very humorous, and he broughtand funny man. His sense of humor brings us a lot of joy.
Puts verb tenses in agreement.
PatMo profile picture PatMoDecember 2023
I have a big family.
I have a biglarge family consisting of three generations of people and a few pets.
This sentence introduces your topic and provides a structure to use for your composition.