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  • Reasons for study according to the age of student

    • The graph shows the difference between the reason for study according to the age of the students.
    • It can be seen from the graph that as older is the student, the study for interest become more important than the study for career.
    • For students under twenty-six years old, 80% of them study based in their careers, and only 10% of these students do the same for their own interests.
    • In the other side, when we analyse the students over 49 years old, about 20% of them focus their studies to benefit their careers, versus 70% of these students are focused on their personal interests.
    • Between 26 and 49 years old, the rate of students focused on their career decreases, and for students who do it just for interest, it increases.
    • Notice that, for all age ranges, the total percentual is less than 100%.
    • It means that there are other reasons for people to study.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • It can be seen from the graph that as older is the student, the study for interest become more important than the study for career.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • It can be seen from the graph that asthe older is the student is, the study for interest becomes more important than the study for career.
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      Voĉdoni nun!
    • It can be seen from the graph that asthe older is the student, the is, studying for interest becomes more important than the studying for career reasons.
      Chris61Chris61 profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
    • For students under twenty-six years old, 80% of them study based in their careers, and only 10% of these students do the same for their own interests.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • For students under twenty-six years old, 80% of them study based ion their careers, and only 10% of these students do the samestudy for their own interests.
      Chris61Chris61 profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
    • In the other side, when we analyse the students over 49 years old, about 20% of them focus their studies to benefit their careers, versus 70% of these students are focused on their personal interests.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • IOn the other side, when we analyse the students over 49 years old, about 20% of them focus their studies to benefit their careers, versus 70% of these students are focused on their personal interests.
      genzaimugenzaimu profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
    • Between 26 and 49 years old, the rate of students focused on their career decreases, and for students who do it just for interest, it increases.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Between 26 and 49 years old, the rate of students focused on their career decreases, and for students who do it just for interest, it increases.
      genzaimugenzaimu profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
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